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Problems and Improvisations Part 2


Our second draft was certainly much better than the first, but we still felt like we should try our absolute best to make it perfect.

The following are the additional problems we identified:


We now planned to make more changes and do the following:


1, Adding yet another talking head and have them be a male

2, Changing the music

3, Shortening the flashback scene.



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